Designing a job crafting experience

Alastair Simpson created a Mentor Canvas intended for mentoring UX designers.

I generally like it because it provides a reasonable structure in a collaborative, canvas style.

However, to make it more appealing to me, I'd like to adjust it to generalise to a non-UX designer perspective and also to reflect some slightly different assumptions of what I consider important for developing oneself and others.  Specifically, I prefer a job crafting approach.

I've created a template on Google Drive: